Sunday, 8 March 2015

Evaluation: First Draft (Trailer)


Once we had completed our final draft for our teaser trailer of a psychological thriller we received comments from people who had watched the trailer and also took into consideration some of the comments to improve our trailer.

Things that worked well:
  • credits were effective
  • mise-en-scene of the graffiti and killer's obsessive book
  • time lapse up London
  • close ups of victim/girl
  • combination of fast paced shots e.g. close ups of previous victim.
Things that needed to change:
  • the sound did not pick up as much as it should do towards the end of the trailer.
  • some shot within the trailer did not add to the effect on the audience.
  • clips towards the end could be faster and some cut out.
  • too many credits as it elongated the trailer unnecessarily. 

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